I think my prose reads as if English were my second language. By the time I get to the end read more

I think my prose reads as if English were my second language. By the time I get to the end of a paragraph, I'm dodging bullets and gasping for breath.

We shot the ball very poorly. We had our chances, but we couldn't take advantage of them.

We shot the ball very poorly. We had our chances, but we couldn't take advantage of them.

We participated in an exhaustive research process to provide the services the everyone is looking for.

We participated in an exhaustive research process to provide the services the everyone is looking for.

Love is a matter of chemistry, but Sex is a matter of physics.

Love is a matter of chemistry, but Sex is a matter of physics.

The sweetest guy you ever met.

The sweetest guy you ever met.

When one kicks over a tea table and smashes everything but the sugar bowl, one may as well pick that read more

When one kicks over a tea table and smashes everything but the sugar bowl, one may as well pick that up and drop it on the bricks, don't you think?

Ashley decided that before Madeleine even got there that she is the best person ever,

Ashley decided that before Madeleine even got there that she is the best person ever,

We didn't play too well down there. Basically, the thought is in our head that we have to redeem ourselves. read more

We didn't play too well down there. Basically, the thought is in our head that we have to redeem ourselves. If we do, we'll make school history.

I think she was able to look at it and think, this isn't just one project; I can group these read more

I think she was able to look at it and think, this isn't just one project; I can group these things together, and we can make all these things happen. She was able to present a bigger package, and that's how it was able to work.